A Leave-Taking

By Algernon Charles Swinburne

    Let us go hence, my songs; she will not hear.     Let us go hence together without fear;     Keep silence now, for singing-time is over,     And over all old things and all things dear.     She loves not you nor me as all we love her.     Yea, though we sang as angels in her ear,     She would not hear.     Let us rise up and part; she will not know.     Let us go seaward as the great winds go,     Full of blown sand and foam; what help is here?     There is no help, for all these things are so,     And all the world is bitter as a tear.     And how these things are, though ye strove to show,     She would not know.     Let us go home and hence; she will not weep.     We gave love many dreams and days to keep,     Flowers without scent, and fruits that would not grow,     Saying If thou wilt, thrust in thy sickle and reap.     All is reaped now; no grass is left to mow;     And we that sowed, though all we fell on sleep,     She would not weep.     Let us go hence and rest; she will not love.     She shall not hear us if we sing hereof,     Nor see loves ways, how sore they are and steep.     Come hence, let be, lie still; it is enough.     Love is a barren sea, bitter and deep;     And though she saw all heaven in flower above,     She would not love.     Let us give up, go down; she will not care.     Though all the stars made gold of all the air,     And the sea moving saw before it move     One moon-flower making all the foam-flowers fair;     Though all those waves went over us, and drove     Deep down the stifling lips and drowning hair,     She would not care.     Let us go hence, go hence; she will not see.     Sing all once more together; surely she,     She too, remembering days and words that were,     Will turn a little toward us, sighing; but we,     We are hence, we are gone, as though we had not been there.     Nay, and though all men seeing had pity on me,     She would not see.

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Poem Details

Language: English
Keywords: Public Domain
Source: Public Domain Collection
Rights/Permissions: Public Domain

Analysis & Notes:
The poem is a poignant exploration of unrequited love and the despair that accompanies it. The recurring theme is the speaker's desperate attempts to gain the affection of a woman who remains indifferent to his love. The writer uses the refrain “she would not” as a lament for the woman's inability to reciprocate his feelings.

The tone of the poem is one of melancholy and resignation, as the speaker comes to terms with the reality of his futile love. The structure follows a repeating pattern of stanzas, each ending with the refrain, creating a rhythmic, song-like quality that adds a layer of irony to the poem's somber theme.

The use of natural imagery—sand, foam, sea, stars—serves as a metaphor for the turbulent emotional state of the speaker. His love is compared to a “barren sea, bitter and deep,” implying its depth and torment. The final stanza intensifies the sense of despair, with the speaker accepting his invisibility to the woman, despite his intense suffering.

In conclusion, the poem presents an emotionally charged exploration of unrequited love, with its lyrical structure and vivid metaphors adding depth to the speaker’s despair and resignation.