The Old Dreamer

Author: Madison Julius Cawein


    Come, let's climb into our attic,
    In our house that's old and gray!
    Life, you're old and I'm rheumatic,
    And it's close of day.

    Lay aside your rags and tatters,
    Shirt and shoes so soiled with clay!
    They're no use now. Nothing matters
    It is close of day.

    Let's to bed. It's cold. No fire.
    And no lamp to make a ray.
    Where's our servant, young Desire?
    Gone at close of day.

    Oft she served us with fine glances,
    Helped us out at work and play:
    She is gone now; better chances;
    And it's close of day.

    Where is Hope, who flaunted scarlet?
    Hope, who led us oft astray?
    Has she proved herself a harlot
    At the close of day?

    What's become of Dream and Vision?
    Friends we thought were here to stay?
    Has life clapped the two in prison
    At the close of day?

    They are gone; and how we miss them!
    They who made our garret gay.
    How we used to hug and kiss them!
    But 'tis close of day.

    Where's friend Love now? Who supposes?
    Has he flung himself away?
    Left us for a wreath of roses
    At the close of day?

    And where's Song? the soul elected
    Has he quit us too for aye?
    Was it poverty he suspected
    Near the close of day?

    How our attic rang their laughter!
    How it echoed laugh and lay!
    None may take their place hereafter?
    It is close of day.

    We have done the best we could do.
    Let us kneel awhile and pray.
    Now, no matter what we would do,
    It is close of day.

    Let's to bed then! It's December.
    Long enough since it was May!
    Let's forget it, and remember
    Now 'tis close of day.

Type of Poem: Lyric Poem

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Language: English

Keywords: Public Domain

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Comments/Notes: This poem presents a profound exploration of life's impermanence, the inevitability of aging, and the loss of youthful vitality and dreams. The theme of the close of day serves as a metaphorical representation of the end of life, with a tone that is reflective, somber, and resigned, yet not without traces of nostalgia and acceptance.

The structure of the poem, composed of quatrains with a consistent rhyme scheme, contributes to the sense of routine and inevitability. The repeated phrase, "it's close of day," further underscores the poem's primary theme. The use of personification is also notable, with abstract concepts like Desire, Hope, Dream, Vision, Love, and Song presented as tangible characters who have left the speaker's life. This technique not only personifies these abstract notions but also conveys the speaker's sense of loss and loneliness as he reminisces about the presence of these entities in his life.

The poem's conclusion, where the speaker accepts his fate and prepares for the metaphorical 'night', encapsulates the poignant acceptance of life’s transience, the inevitability of aging and the passing of time. Despite the somber themes, there is a sense of peace and acceptance in the speaker's tone, suggesting that the close of day is not to be feared but accepted as a natural progression in life.

Exploring Lyric Poetry

Lyric poetry is a powerful and intimate form of expression, characterized by its focus on the personal emotions and thoughts of the poet. Often musical in nature, lyric poems resonate with readers through their vivid language and rhythmic flow, capturing moments of intense feeling.


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  • Expressive Language: Lyric poems use rich and evocative language to convey deep emotions, often painting a vivid picture of the poet's inner world.
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  • Musicality: Lyric poems often feature a rhythmic structure, with meter and rhyme that give them a song-like quality, enhancing the emotional impact.

From ancient odes to contemporary free verse, lyric poetry remains a beloved and enduring form, celebrated for its ability to articulate the nuances of human emotion in a way that resonates deeply with readers.