At Moonrise

By Madison Julius Cawein

    Pale faces looked up at me, up from the earth, like flowers;     Pale hands reached down to me, out of the air, like stars,     As over the hills, robed on with the twilight, the Hours,     The Day's last Hours, departed, and Dusk put up her bars.     Pale fingers beckoned me on; pale fingers, like starlit mist;     Dim voices called to me, dim as the wind's dim rune,     As up from the night, like a nymph from the amethyst     Of her waters, as silver as foam, rose the round, white breast of the moon.     And I followed the pearly waving and beckon of hands,     The luring glitter and dancing glimmer of feet,     And the sibilant whisper of silence, that summoned to lands     Remoter than legend or faery, where Myth and Tradition meet.     And I came to a place where the shadow of ancient Night     Brooded o'er ruins, far wilder than castles of dreams;     Fantastic, a mansion of phantoms, where, wandering white,     I met with a shadowy presence whose voice I had followed, it seems.     And the ivy waved in the wind, and the moonlight laid,     Like a ghostly benediction, a finger wan     On the face of the one from whose eyes the darkness rayed     The face of the one I had known in the years long gone.     And she looked in my face, and kissed me on brow and on cheek,     Murmured my name, and wistfully smiled in my eyes,     And the tears welled up in my heart, that was wild and weak,     And my bosom seemed bursting with yearning, and my soul with sighs.     And there 'mid the ruins we sat.. . Oh, strange were the words that she said!     Distant and dim and strange; and hollow the looks that she gave:     And I knew her then for a joy, a joy that was dead,     A hope, a beautiful hope, that my youth had laid in its grave.

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Language: English
Keywords: Public Domain
Source: Public Domain Collection
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Analysis & Notes:
This poem is a haunting and mystical exploration of memory, loss, and longing, steeped in rich imagery and evocative language. The poet employs the theme of a journey, using the speaker's physical traversal of a nocturnal landscape as a metaphor for a psychological voyage into the past. The tone is melancholic and spectral, underscored by the repeated imagery of pale, ghostly figures and the recurring motif of twilight and darkness.

The poem's structure is consistent, with each stanza contributing to the progression of the narrative journey. The poet uses a range of literary devices to enhance the emotive impact and thematic depth of the poem. The similes in the first two lines, comparing faces to flowers and hands to stars, establish an otherworldly atmosphere, while the personification of 'Hours' and 'Dusk' imbue the setting with a sense of time's inexorable passage. The reference to 'Myth and Tradition' hints at the universal human experience of reminiscence and regret.

The climax of the poem, where the speaker encounters a 'shadowy presence' in the ruins, is poignant and imbued with a sense of tragic revelation. The subsequent lines, filled with expressions of grief and yearning, reinforce the theme of lost love and the lingering power of memory. The final lines, recognising the figure as a 'joy that was dead' and a 'hope' laid in the grave, encapsulate the profound sense of loss and longing that permeates the poem. This work is a powerful testament to the enduring impact of past relationships and the haunting nature of memory.

Exploring Narrative Poetry

Narrative poetry is a form of poetry that tells a story, often making use of the voices of a narrator and characters as well. Unlike lyric poetry, which focuses on emotions and thoughts, narrative poetry is dedicated to storytelling, weaving tales that captivate readers through plot and character development.


Narrative poems are unique in their ability to combine the depth of storytelling with the expressive qualities of poetry. Here are some defining characteristics:

  • Structured Plot: Narrative poems typically have a clear beginning, middle, and end, following a plot that might involve conflict, climax, and resolution, much like a short story or novel.
  • Character Development: Characters in narrative poems are often well-developed, with distinct voices and personalities that drive the story forward.
  • Descriptive Language: The language used in narrative poetry is vivid and descriptive, painting a clear picture of the scenes and events, while also conveying the emotions and atmosphere of the story.

From ancient epics like "The Iliad" and "The Odyssey" to more modern narrative poems, this form continues to engage readers by blending the art of storytelling with the beauty and rhythm of poetry.