An Idyll

By Madison Julius Cawein

    He was a boy, sun-burned and brown,     And she a girl from a neighboring town:     Dark were her eyes and dark her hair,     And her cheeks as red as the ripe peach there:     Dainty and sweet, with a far-away     Look in her eyes like the skies of May.     And it came to pass one afternoon     She walked in the fields; and the month was June:     In the hay-heaped fields and the meadowland     With trees and hills on either hand.     And the lad, who worked on her father's farm,     Had laid him down all tired and warm.     He had been toiling day after day     Mowing and raking and hilling the hay.     And now at last, with his work well done,     He slept by a stack away from the sun.     And she, who came with her young head full     Of thoughts that never are learned in school,     Young dreams and fancies no girl knows of     Unless she is far on the road to love,     When she saw him there, where he lay and slept,     A little nearer she cautiously stept:     Then stood, big-eyed, and looked around,     As if afraid of the one she'd found;     Of him she knew not, who seemed to take     Her heart in a hold she could not break.     He looked so tired and young and hot,     That an impulse swept her, she scarce knew what:     Primitive, wild, that would not wait,     That cried in her blood, "There lies your mate!"     And all was still, save the cricket's shrill,     And the breeze that blew from the wooded hill.     And so she stood with a foot back-drawn,     Like a Nymph that comes on a sleeping Faun:     Then stooped and kissed him, and turned and fled,     Sobbing, her heart of itself adread.     But he who lay in the hay slept on,     And never knew what had come and gone:     The love that had bent to his life and kissed     That something, called fate, which each has missed.

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Language: English
Keywords: Public Domain
Source: Public Domain Collection
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Analysis & Notes:
The poem presents a vivid pastoral scene and a youthful romance, capturing the essence of innocence and nascent love. The themes of young love, nature, and fate are beautifully woven together using descriptive and evocative language. The narrative follows a girl's discovery and silent declaration of her love for a young, hardworking farm boy, adding an element of intrigue and tension.

The tone is tender, nostalgic, and somewhat melancholic, particularly in the concluding lines where the boy remains unaware of the girl's affection, suggesting the tragedy of unrequited love. The structure of the poem is straightforward, using a traditional rhyme scheme that adds a rhythmic quality and aids in storytelling. The use of vivid imagery is a standout feature of this poem, painting a picturesque scene that engages the reader's senses and emotions. The poet also employs personification, notably in the line "That something, called fate, which each has missed," giving fate a tangible, almost human quality. The metaphor of the girl as a "Nymph" and the boy as a "Faun" adds a mythical dimension, further enhancing the poetic charm and timeless allure of this innocent love story.

Exploring Narrative Poetry

Narrative poetry is a form of poetry that tells a story, often making use of the voices of a narrator and characters as well. Unlike lyric poetry, which focuses on emotions and thoughts, narrative poetry is dedicated to storytelling, weaving tales that captivate readers through plot and character development.


Narrative poems are unique in their ability to combine the depth of storytelling with the expressive qualities of poetry. Here are some defining characteristics:

  • Structured Plot: Narrative poems typically have a clear beginning, middle, and end, following a plot that might involve conflict, climax, and resolution, much like a short story or novel.
  • Character Development: Characters in narrative poems are often well-developed, with distinct voices and personalities that drive the story forward.
  • Descriptive Language: The language used in narrative poetry is vivid and descriptive, painting a clear picture of the scenes and events, while also conveying the emotions and atmosphere of the story.

From ancient epics like "The Iliad" and "The Odyssey" to more modern narrative poems, this form continues to engage readers by blending the art of storytelling with the beauty and rhythm of poetry.