A Bit Of Coast

Author: Madison Julius Cawein


    One tree, storm-twisted, like an evil hag,
    The sea-wind in its hair, beside a path
    Waves frantic arms, as if in wild-witch wrath
    At all the world. Gigantic, grey as slag,
    Great boulders shoulder through the hills, or crag
    The coast with danger, monster-like, that lifts
    Huge granite, round which wheel the gulls and swifts,
    And at whose base the rotting sea-weeds drag.
    Inward the hills are wooded; valley-cleft;
    Tangled with berries; vistaed dark with pines;
    At whose far end, as 'twere within a frame,
    Some trail of water that the ocean left
    Gleams like a painting where one white sail shines,
    Lit with the sunset's poppy-coloured flame.

Type of Poem: Sonnet

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Language: English

Keywords: Public Domain

Source: Public Domain Collection

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Rights/Permissions: Public Domain

Comments/Notes: This poem, rich in vivid imagery and a tangible sense of place, uses nature as a metaphor to explore themes of conflict, decay, and ultimately, hope. The first half of the poem is filled with aggressive, violent imagery - a tree twisted by storms, waving "frantic arms," boulders shouldering through hills, and a craggy coast threatening danger. These images, depicted with a hard, dark palette of greys and harsh textures, set a tone of struggle and hostility.

The second half, however, leads us into a more serene and hopeful landscape. The hills are "wooded", the valleys "tangled with berries," and the vista is "dark with pines." This shift in scenery and tone also marks a shift in literary devices. Where the first half uses simile and metaphor to create a sense of danger, the second half uses them to create a sense of peace and serenity. The poem ends on a hopeful note, with the image of a single white sail illuminated by the "sunset's poppy-coloured flame." This is a stark contrast to the "rotting sea-weeds" at the base of the granite in the earlier lines. The poem, therefore, masterfully moves from a sense of conflict and struggle to a sense of tranquillity and hope, using the natural world as its canvas.

Understanding the Sonnet

The sonnet is one of the most enduring and celebrated forms of poetry, known for its strict structure and profound themes. With a history spanning centuries, sonnets have been used to explore love, beauty, politics, and mortality, all within the confines of just 14 lines.


Sonnets are characterized by their precise form and rhyme scheme, which vary depending on the type of sonnet. Here’s a closer look:

  • Shakespearean (English) Sonnet: Composed of three quatrains followed by a final couplet, with a rhyme scheme of ABABCDCDEFEFGG. This form often builds a complex argument or narrative, culminating in a powerful closing statement.
  • Petrarchan (Italian) Sonnet: Divided into an octave (eight lines) and a sestet (six lines), with a typical rhyme scheme of ABBAABBA for the octave, followed by various patterns in the sestet such as CDECDE or CDCDCD. The octave usually presents a problem, with the sestet providing a resolution.
  • Meter: Sonnets are traditionally written in iambic pentameter, which gives the poem a rhythmic and melodic quality that enhances its emotional impact.

The sonnet’s enduring appeal lies in its ability to condense complex emotions and ideas into a small but potent package, making it a favorite form for poets seeking to explore profound themes with precision and elegance.