The Old Wife and the New

By Victor James Daley

    He sat beneath the curling vines     That round the gay verandah twined,     His forehead seamed with sorrows lines,     An old man with a weary mind.     His young wife, with a rosy face     And brown arms ambered by the sun,     Went flitting all about the place,     Master and mistress both in one.     What caused that old mans look of care?     Was she not blithe and fair to see?     What blacker than her raven hair,     What darker than her eyes might be?     The old man bent his weary head;     The sunlight on his gray hair shone;     His thoughts were with a woman dead     And buried, years and years agone:     The good old wife who took her stand     Beside him at the altar-side,     And walked with him, hand clasped in hand,     Through joy and sorrow till she died.     Ah, she was fair as hearts desire,     And gay, and supple-limbed, in truth,     And in his veins there leapt like fire     The hot red blood of lusty youth.     She stood by him in shine and shade,     And, when hard-beaten at his best,     She took him like a child and laid     His aching head upon her breast.     She helped him make a little home     Where once were gum-trees gaunt and stark,     And bloodwoods waved green-feathered foam,     Working from dawn of day to dark,     Till that dark forest formed a frame     For vineyards that the gods might bless,     And what was savage once became     An Eden in the wilderness.     And how at their first vintage-time     She laughed and sang, you see such shapes     On vases of the Grecian prime,     And danced a reel upon the grapes!     And ever, as the years went on,     All things she kept with thrifty hand,     Till never shone the sun upon     A fairer homestead in the land.     Then children came, ah, me! ah, me!     Sad blessings that a mother craves!     That old man from his seat could see     The shadows playing oer their graves.     And then she closed her eyes at last,     Her gentle, useful, peaceful life     Was over, garnered with the past;     God rest thee gently, Good Old Wife!     .     .     .     .     .     His young wife has a rosy face,     And laughs, with reddest lips apart,     But cannot fill the empty place     Within that old mans lonely heart.     His young wife has a rosy face,     And brown arms ambered by the sun,     Goes flitting all about the place,     Master and mistress both in one;     But though she sings, or though she sighs,     He sees her not, he sees instead     A gray-haired Shade with gentle eyes,     The good old wife, long dead, long dead.     He sits beneath the curling vines,     Through which the merry sunrays dart,     His forehead seamed with sorrows lines,     An old man with a broken heart.

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Language: English
Keywords: Public Domain
Source: Public Domain Collection
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Analysis & Notes:
This poignant poem intimately explores themes of loss, longing, memory, and the inexorable passage of time. The poet deftly weaves a narrative of an elderly man, burdened with grief and nostalgia for his deceased wife, even as he lives with a younger wife who is unable to fill the void left by his loss. The contrast between the vibrant younger wife, full of life and energy, and the melancholic older man, steeped in nostalgia and sorrow, provides a powerful exploration of the human condition and the complex emotions associated with love, loss, and aging.

The poem's structure is composed of quatrains with a consistent rhyme scheme, which lends a rhythmic quality to the narration, enabling the reader to be drawn into the man's world of memories and emotions. The use of imagery is notable in the poem, with the poet employing vivid descriptions of both the characters and the environment. The 'curling vines' and the 'gay verandah', for instance, serve not just as elements of the setting, but also as symbols of both the passage of time and the man's entwined past and present. The repetition of the phrase 'His young wife has a rosy face' underscores the man's inability to move on from his past, even amidst the vibrancy of the present. The recurring mention of the older man's sorrowful gaze and weary mind further intensifies the melancholic tone of the poem. The poet successfully uses these devices to paint a poignant picture of a man trapped in the throes of his past, unable to embrace his present, thus illuminating the complexities of human emotions and the timeless theme of love and loss.

Exploring Narrative Poetry

Narrative poetry is a form of poetry that tells a story, often making use of the voices of a narrator and characters as well. Unlike lyric poetry, which focuses on emotions and thoughts, narrative poetry is dedicated to storytelling, weaving tales that captivate readers through plot and character development.


Narrative poems are unique in their ability to combine the depth of storytelling with the expressive qualities of poetry. Here are some defining characteristics:

  • Structured Plot: Narrative poems typically have a clear beginning, middle, and end, following a plot that might involve conflict, climax, and resolution, much like a short story or novel.
  • Character Development: Characters in narrative poems are often well-developed, with distinct voices and personalities that drive the story forward.
  • Descriptive Language: The language used in narrative poetry is vivid and descriptive, painting a clear picture of the scenes and events, while also conveying the emotions and atmosphere of the story.

From ancient epics like "The Iliad" and "The Odyssey" to more modern narrative poems, this form continues to engage readers by blending the art of storytelling with the beauty and rhythm of poetry.