The Martyr

By Victor James Daley

    Not only on cross and gibbet,     By sword, and fire, and flood,     Have perished the worlds sad martyrs     Whose names are writ in blood.     A woman lay in a hovel,     Mean, dismal, gasping for breath;     One friend alone was beside her,     The name of him was, Death.     For the sake of her orphan children,     For money to buy them food,     She had slaved in the dismal hovel     And wasted her womanhood.     Winter and Spring and Summer     Came each with a load of cares;     And Autumn to her brought only     A harvest of gray hairs.     Far out in the blessd country,     Beyond the smoky town,     The winds of God were blowing     Evermore up and down;     The trees were waving signals     Of joy from the bush beyond;     The gum its blue-green banner,     The fern its dark green frond;     Flower called to flower in whispers     By sweet caressing names,     And young gum shoots sprang upward     Like woodland altar-flames;     And, deep in the distant ranges,     The magpies fluting song     Roused musical, mocking echoes     In the woods of Dandenong;     And riders were galloping gaily     With loose-held flowing reins,     Through dim and shadowy gullies,     Across broad, treeless plains;     And winds through the Heads came wafting     A breath of life from the sea,     And over the blue horizon     The ships sailed silently;     And out of the sea at morning     The sun rose, golden bright,     And in crimson, and gold, and purple     Sank in the sea at night;     But in dreams alone she saw them,     Her hours of toil between;     For life to her was only     A heartless dead machine.     Her heart was in the graveyard     Where lay her children three,     Nor work nor prayer could save them,     Nor tears of agony.     On the lips of her last and dearest     Pressing a farewell kiss,     She cried aloud in her anguish,     Can God make amends for this?     Dull, desperate, ceaseless slaving     Bereft her of power to pray,     And Man was careless and cruel,     And God was far away.     But who shall measure His mercies!     His ways are in the deep;     And, after a life of sorrow,     He gave her His gift of sleep.     Rest comes at last to the weary,     And freedom to the slave;     Her tired and worn-out body     Sleeps well in its pauper grave.     But His angel bore her soul up     To that Bright Land and Fair,     Where Sorrow enters never,     Nor any cloud of Care.     They came to a lovely valley,     Agleam with asphodel,     And the soul of the woman speaking     Said, Here I fain would dwell!     The Angel answered gently:     O Soul most pure and dear,     O Soul most tried and truest,     They dwelling is not here!     Behold thy place appointed,     Long kept, long waiting, come!     Where bloom on the hills of heaven     The roses of Martyrdom!

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Language: English
Keywords: Public Domain
Source: Public Domain Collection
Rights/Permissions: Public Domain

Analysis & Notes:
This poignant narrative poem vividly portrays the harsh realities of life, death, and the promise of salvation. The central themes are martyrdom, suffering, and redemption, with a distinct emphasis on the hardships faced by women, particularly those living in poverty.

The tone of the poem is initially somber and despairing, which effectively mirrors the life of the woman who is struggling in despair and loneliness. The poet utilizes strong, emotive language and imagery to emphasize the woman's struggles and sacrifice, making her plight both tangible and deeply affecting to the reader. The vivid, contrasting imagery of the 'blessed country' and the 'dismal hovel' serves to highlight the disparity between the woman's harsh reality and the beauty and freedom of the outside world.

The structure of the poem, with its regular rhyme scheme and rhythm, helps to convey the relentless, monotonous nature of the woman's life. The use of religious symbolism and allusions to martyrdom elevates the woman's suffering to a spiritual level, adding depth and gravitas to her story. The twist in the final stanzas, where the woman's soul is finally granted rest and a place in heaven, introduces a hopeful note, transforming her story from one of despair to one of redemption and triumph.

The poem is ultimately a powerful commentary on societal neglect and the power of faith and resilience in the face of adversity. It encourages empathy and understanding, while also challenging the reader to reflect on broader issues of social justice and the human capacity for endurance.

Exploring Narrative Poetry

Narrative poetry is a form of poetry that tells a story, often making use of the voices of a narrator and characters as well. Unlike lyric poetry, which focuses on emotions and thoughts, narrative poetry is dedicated to storytelling, weaving tales that captivate readers through plot and character development.


Narrative poems are unique in their ability to combine the depth of storytelling with the expressive qualities of poetry. Here are some defining characteristics:

  • Structured Plot: Narrative poems typically have a clear beginning, middle, and end, following a plot that might involve conflict, climax, and resolution, much like a short story or novel.
  • Character Development: Characters in narrative poems are often well-developed, with distinct voices and personalities that drive the story forward.
  • Descriptive Language: The language used in narrative poetry is vivid and descriptive, painting a clear picture of the scenes and events, while also conveying the emotions and atmosphere of the story.

From ancient epics like "The Iliad" and "The Odyssey" to more modern narrative poems, this form continues to engage readers by blending the art of storytelling with the beauty and rhythm of poetry.