A Sunset Fantasy

By Victor James Daley

    Spellbound by a sweet fantasy     At evenglow I stand     Beside an opaline strange sea     That rings a sunset land.     The rich lights fade out one by one,     And, like a peony     Drowning in wine, the crimson sun     Sinks down in that strange sea.     His wake across the ocean-floor     In a long glory lies,     Like a gold wave-way to the shore     Of some sea paradise.     My dream flies after him, and I     Am in another land;     The sun sets in another sky,     And we sit hand in hand.     Gray eyes look into mine; such eyes     I think the angels are,     Soft as the soft light in the skies     When shines the morning star,     And tremulous as morn, when thin     Gold lights begin to glow,     Revealing the bright soul within     As dawn the sun below.     So, hand in hand, we watch the sun     Burn down the Western deeps,     Dreaming a charmed dream, as one     Who in enchantment sleeps;     A dream of how we twain some day,     Careless of map or chart,     Will both take ship and sail away     Into the sunsets heart.     Our ship shall be of sandal built,     Like ships in old-world tales,     Carven with cunning art, and gilt,     And winged with scented sails     Of silver silk, whereon the red     Great gladioli burn,     A rainbow-flag at her masthead,     A rose-flag at her stern;     And, perching on the point above     Wherefrom the pennon blows,     The figure of a flying dove,     And in her beak a rose.     And from the fading land the breeze     Shall bring us, blowing low,     Old odours and old memories,     And airs of long ago.     A melody that has no words     Of mortal speech a part,     Yet touching all the deepest chords     That tremble in the heart:     A scented song blown oversea,     As though from bowers of bloom     A wind-harp in a lilac-tree     Breathed music and perfume.     And we, no more with longings pale,     Will smile to hear it blow;     I in the shadow of the sail,     You in the sunset-glow.     For, with the fading land, our fond     Old fears shall all fade out,     Paled by the light from shores beyond     The dread of Death or Doubt.     And from a gloomy cloud above     When Death his shadow flings,     The Spirit of Immortal Love     Will shield us with his wings.     He is the lord of dreams divine,     And lures us with his smiles     Along the splendour opaline     Unto the Blessed Isles.

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Poem Details

Language: English
Keywords: Public Domain
Source: Public Domain Collection
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Analysis & Notes:
This poem relies heavily on vivid and sensory imagery, setting up a dreamlike atmosphere that weaves an intricate tapestry of fantasy and escapism. The themes that prominently surface include longing, dreams, love, and transcendence, all embodied through the backdrop of a fantastical sea journey. The tone is predominantly serene and hopeful, yet subtly tinged with melancholic yearning, creating a rich emotional texture that deeply resonates with the reader.

The structure of the poem follows a consistent rhyme scheme, contributing to its rhythmic flow and aiding in its storytelling. The use of similes and metaphors, like 'a peony drowning in wine', 'like a gold wave-way', and 'the Spirit of Immortal Love' is striking and gives the poem a sense of romantic grandeur. The poet's use of colors - crimson, gold, opaline, gray - are particularly evocative, allowing the reader to visually partake in the poet's imaginative journey. The poem concludes with a poignant defiance of death and doubt, invoking the protective power of love and dreams, and leaves the reader with an uplifting sense of hope and a yearning for the 'Blessed Isles'.

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Lyric poetry is a powerful and intimate form of expression, characterized by its focus on the personal emotions and thoughts of the poet. Often musical in nature, lyric poems resonate with readers through their vivid language and rhythmic flow, capturing moments of intense feeling.


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  • Expressive Language: Lyric poems use rich and evocative language to convey deep emotions, often painting a vivid picture of the poet's inner world.
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  • Musicality: Lyric poems often feature a rhythmic structure, with meter and rhyme that give them a song-like quality, enhancing the emotional impact.

From ancient odes to contemporary free verse, lyric poetry remains a beloved and enduring form, celebrated for its ability to articulate the nuances of human emotion in a way that resonates deeply with readers.