Evening: Barents Sea

Author: Ben Jonson

The trawl of unquiet mind drops astern

Great lucid streamers bar the sky ahead
(bifurcated banners at a tourney)
light alchemizes the brass on the bridge
into sallow gold
now the short northern
autumn day closes quickly

the thin coast
(of grey Norway is it, or of Russia?)
distinguished only as a formal change
in the pattern of clouds on our port side

on the deck the strung lights illuminate no
movement but the sullen swill of water
in the washer, but the unnatural way
dead starfish and disregarded dabs swim
in the strict seas surging through the bilges
and out. A fishgut hangs like a hank of
hair from the iron grill in a pound board

brighter now that the sun, the fishfinder's
green bleep catches the skipper's intentness

and the trawl is down, is out, is catching!
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Type of Poem: Narrative Poem

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Language: English

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Comments/Notes: "The trawl of unquiet mind drops astern" is a rich and evocative poem that uses vivid imagery and metaphor to capture a moment in time and reflect on the inner workings of the human mind. The poem skillfully intertwines the physical realm of a maritime journey with the metaphorical journey of the human consciousness. The juxtaposition of tangible elements such as the "brass on the bridge" and "the strung lights" with more abstract concepts like the "unquiet mind" and "lucid streamers" creates a sense of depth and complexity. The use of specific details, such as the "bifurcated banners at a tourney," contributes to the overall realism of the poem and deepens its metaphorical implications, as the banners could symbolize internal conflicts or dualities within the human mind.

In the second half of the poem, the imagery becomes darker and more introspective. The mention of "dead starfish and disregarded dabs" swimming in the

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