A Ballad With A Serious Conclusion

By James Whitcomb Riley

    Crowd about me, little children -         Come and cluster 'round my knee     While I tell a little story         That happened once with me.     My father he had gone away         A-sailing on the foam,     Leaving me - the merest infant -         And my mother dear at home;     For my father was a sailor,         And he sailed the ocean o'er     For full five years ere yet again         He reached his native shore.     And I had grown up rugged         And healthy day by day,     Though I was but a puny babe         When father went away.     Poor mother she would kiss me         And look at me and sigh     So strangely, oft I wondered         And would ask the reason why.     And she would answer sadly,         Between her sobs and tears, -     "You look so like your father,         Far away so many years!"     And then she would caress me         And brush my hair away,     And tell me not to question,         But to run about my play.     Thus I went playing thoughtfully -         For that my mother said, -     "YOU LOOK SO LIKE YOUR FATHER!"         Kept ringing in my head.     So, ranging once the golden sands         That looked out on the sea,     I called aloud, "My father dear,         Come back to ma and me!"     Then I saw a glancing shadow         On the sand, and heard the shriek     Of a sea-gull flying seaward,         And I heard a gruff voice speak: -     "Ay, ay, my little shipmate,         I thought I heard you hail;     Were you trumpeting that sea-gull,         Or do you see a sail?"     And as rough and gruff a sailor         As ever sailed the sea     Was standing near grotesquely         And leering dreadfully.     I replied, though I was frightened,         "It was my father dear     I was calling for across the sea -         I think he didn't hear."     And then the sailor leered again         In such a frightful way,     And made so many faces         I was little loath to stay:     But he started fiercely toward me -         Then made a sudden halt     And roared, "I think he heard you!"         And turned a somersault.     Then a wild fear overcame me,         And I flew off like the wind,     Shrieking "MOTHER!" - and the sailor         Just a little way behind!     And then my mother heard me,         And I saw her shade her eyes,     Looking toward me from the doorway,         Transfixed with pale surprise     For a moment - then her features         Glowed with all their wonted charms     As the sailor overtook me,         And I fainted in her arms.     When I awoke to reason         I shuddered with affright     Till I felt my mother's presence         With a thrill of wild delight -     Till, amid a shower of kisses         Falling glad as summer rain,     A muffled thunder rumbled, -         "Is he coming 'round again?"     Then I shrieked and clung unto her,         While her features flushed and burned     As she told me it was father         From a foreign land returned.     .     .     .     .     .     .     .     I said - when I was calm again,         And thoughtfully once more     Had dwelt upon my mother's words         Of just the day before, -     "I DON'T look like my father,         As you told me yesterday -     I know I don't - or father         Would have run the other way."

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Poem Details

Language: English
Keywords: Public Domain
Source: Public Domain Collection
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Analysis & Notes:
The poem, told from the perspective of a child, offers a touching insight into themes of absence, growth, and identity. It's a narrative poem, with a simple structure that gives it a storytelling rhythm, making it feel like a tale recounted by a fireside. The poet employs a conversational tone that enhances the sense of personal connection, while the use of dialogue adds vibrancy and a sense of immediacy to the events.

The core theme is the child's longing for his absent father and the consequent growth both in his physical form and understanding of his identity. There's a poignant contrast between the innocent perspective of the child and the more complex reality of the adults around him. This is highlighted by the mother's sighs and the child's confusion about his growing likeness to his absent father.

The surprise of the father's return, the child's fear, and the eventual revelation of the father's identity introduce a dramatic twist, leading to the child's eventual realization about his own identity. The ending, while humorous and childlike, carries an underlying commentary on the idealized image of the father versus the reality. This twist adds depth to the poem, showing the child beginning to grapple with the complexities of adult relationships and his place within them.

The poet's use of vivid imagery, especially in the description of the sea, the sailor, and the child's reactions, enhances the engaging quality of the poem. The repetition of the line "You look so like your father" serves as a refrain, emphasizing the central conflict of the child's struggle with his identity. The use of sound—like the shriek of the gull, the call for the father, and the sailor's gruff voice—adds an auditory depth to the poem.

Exploring Narrative Poetry

Narrative poetry is a form of poetry that tells a story, often making use of the voices of a narrator and characters as well. Unlike lyric poetry, which focuses on emotions and thoughts, narrative poetry is dedicated to storytelling, weaving tales that captivate readers through plot and character development.


Narrative poems are unique in their ability to combine the depth of storytelling with the expressive qualities of poetry. Here are some defining characteristics:

  • Structured Plot: Narrative poems typically have a clear beginning, middle, and end, following a plot that might involve conflict, climax, and resolution, much like a short story or novel.
  • Character Development: Characters in narrative poems are often well-developed, with distinct voices and personalities that drive the story forward.
  • Descriptive Language: The language used in narrative poetry is vivid and descriptive, painting a clear picture of the scenes and events, while also conveying the emotions and atmosphere of the story.

From ancient epics like "The Iliad" and "The Odyssey" to more modern narrative poems, this form continues to engage readers by blending the art of storytelling with the beauty and rhythm of poetry.