The Parallel

By Thomas Moore

    Yes, sad one of Sion,[1] if closely resembling,         In shame and in sorrow, thy withered-up heart--     If drinking deep, deep, of the same "cup of trembling"         Could make us thy children, our parent thou art,     Like thee doth our nation lie conquered and broken,         And fallen from her head is the once royal crown;     In her streets, in her halls, Desolation hath spoken,         And "while it is day yet, her sun hath gone down."[2]     Like thine doth her exile, mid dreams of returning,         Die far from the home it were life to behold;     Like thine do her sons, in the day of their mourning,         Remember the bright things that blest them of old.     Ah, well may we call her, like thee "the Forsaken,"[3]         Her boldest are vanquished, her proudest are slaves;     And the harps of her minstrels, when gayest they waken,         Have tones mid their mirth like the wind over graves!     Yet hadst thou thy vengeance--yet came there the morrow,         That shines out, at last, on the longest dark night,     When the sceptre, that smote thee with slavery and sorrow,         Was shivered at once, like a reed, in thy sight.     When that cup, which for others the proud Golden City[4]         Had brimmed full of bitterness, drenched her own lips;     And the world she had trampled on heard, without pity,         The howl in her halls, and the cry from her ships.     When the curse Heaven keeps for the haughty came over         Her merchants rapacious, her rulers unjust,     And, a ruin, at last, for the earthworm to cover,[5]         The Lady of Kingdoms[6] lay low in the dust.

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Language: English
Keywords: Public Domain
Source: Public Domain Collection
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Analysis & Notes:
This poem is a poignant exploration of loss, dispossession, and eventual retribution. The poet uses biblical references, such as "sad one of Sion" and "cup of trembling," to convey a sense of profound sorrow and suffering. The poem's tone, which fluctuates between despair and a kind of grim satisfaction, mirrors the narrative's progression from desolation to revenge.

The structure of the poem is key to its thematic development. The initial stanzas detail the painful condition of the exiled nation, using powerfully evocative imagery like a "withered-up heart" and a "sun [that] hath gone down." The speaker compares their own nation's suffering to that of Sion, using this comparison to establish a bond of shared pain and defeat. This sense of shared suffering is further deepened by the repetition of "Like thine," emphasizing the parallels between their experiences.

The poem then shifts to a tone of grim satisfaction in the latter stanzas, as the oppressor experiences the same suffering they once inflicted. The poet uses vivid and dramatic imagery, like a sceptre "shivered at once" and a city drenched with its own bitter cup, to illustrate this divine retribution. The poem ends on a triumphant, if somber, note as the "Lady of Kingdoms" is finally brought low.

The poem is notable for its effective use of biblical allusions and its emotionally charged language. The poet's skillful interweaving of personal and collective experiences of suffering adds depth to the narrative, making the eventual victory feel hard-won yet worthy. All in all, it’s a deeply moving exploration of loss, shared suffering, and the hope for justice.

Understanding Elegy

An elegy is a form of poetry that expresses sorrow or lamentation, often for someone who has died. This type of poetry serves as a tribute to the deceased, reflecting on their life and the grief left behind.


Elegies are deeply emotional and personal, exploring themes of loss, mourning, and remembrance. Here are some defining characteristics:

  • Mournful Tone: Elegies are characterized by a tone of sadness and reflection, as the poet grapples with the pain of loss.
  • Tribute to the Deceased: The subject of an elegy is often someone who has passed away, with the poem serving as a memorial that honors their life and legacy.
  • Personal Reflection: Elegies often include personal reflections on the impact of the deceased on the poet's life, as well as broader musings on mortality and the human condition.
  • Structure and Form: While elegies can vary in form, they often follow a traditional structure that includes an expression of grief, praise for the deceased, and a sense of consolation or acceptance.

From ancient times to the present, elegies have provided a way for poets to navigate the complexities of grief and loss, offering solace and a means of preserving the memory of those who have passed.